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  Diane Dew on February 4, 2012 4:04 PM

  I'd love some critiques on any of mine!

  I'd love some critiques on any of mine!

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  John Ricca on February 5, 2012 12:41 PM

  I think I see what your are trying to capture. The problem is that the human eye go the the sharpest, brightest, or most colorful thing in an image. So, here, my eye goes directly to the sharp windows on the left and never really moves away toward the more interesting (to me, anyway) patterns in the right 2/3 of the image. You might want to try to crop off the left side of the image to make the diagonal line end in the lower left corner. I don't think tat the remaining sharp windows will dominate the image so much, especially if you darken them more.

  I think I see what your are trying to capture. The problem is that the human eye go the the sharpest, brightest, or most colorful thing in an image. So, here, my eye goes directly to the sharp windows on the left and never really moves away toward the more interesting (to me, anyway) patterns in the right 2/3 of the image. You might want to try to crop off the left side of the image to make the diagonal line end in the lower left corner. I don't think tat the remaining sharp windows will dominate the image so much, especially if you darken them more.

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  Diane Dew on February 5, 2012 4:58 PM

  Thanks for you detailed comment, John. For me, I kind of like the contrast between the left building and the right one. I also have some that are cropped more like what you suggest, and those are interesting, too! It's fun to explore all the different ways to express what I see.

  Thanks for you detailed comment, John. For me, I kind of like the contrast between the left building and the right one. I also have some that are cropped more like what you suggest, and those are interesting, too! It's fun to explore all the different ways to express what I see.

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  Deborah Hymes on February 5, 2012 10:18 PM

  Such a beautiful shot! My eye goes immediately to the "fluidity" of the glass. Makes me see this building in a whole new way. Interesting how cropping changes a photo. I'd love to see some of your other shots.

  Such a beautiful shot! My eye goes immediately to the "fluidity" of the glass. Makes me see this building in a whole new way. Interesting how cropping changes a photo. I'd love to see some of your other shots.

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  Blanka on February 6, 2012 10:35 AM

  i really like this photo, especially reflections on the left side. beautiful color contrast. Actually Diane I love all of your photos, I just was lazy to write the wows below each of them.

  i really like this photo, especially reflections on the left side. beautiful color contrast. Actually Diane I love all of your photos, I just was lazy to write the wows below each of them.

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  Diane Dew on February 7, 2012 8:21 AM

  Thank you, Blanka! I've really enjoyed your photos as well.

  Thank you, Blanka! I've really enjoyed your photos as well.

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  Blanka on February 7, 2012 6:03 PM

  Thank you Diane. YOU are the master.

  Thank you Diane. YOU are the master.

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