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Review some short screenplays

 

A few writers have some shorts to critique at our June 11 meeting. I haven't received them yet, so =I’ve posted one I wrote several months ago. You can find it at this link: http://files.meetup.com/1515328/Footprints.pdf. If I get the others, I’ll get those posted. I look forward to your feedback.

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  • Russ M.

    Thanks, Berenice. I like the specific feedback and the example you provided.

    June 12, 2013

  • A former member
    A former member

    I will try to!

    June 11, 2013

  • A former member
    A former member

    Hi! I might not make it since I'd be driving in from 1 hour+ away and got double-booked, but I will try to come. I enjoyed your script, Russ! My only note is to build a more vivid picture of your characters. The best example I ever saw of this was in Frank Darabont's script for Shawshank:

    ANDY DUFRESNE, mid-20's, wire rim glasses, three-piece suit.
    Under normal circumstances a respectable, solid citizen; hardly
    dangerous, perhaps even meek. But these circumstances are far
    from normal. He is disheveled, unshaven, and very drunk. A
    cigarette smolders in his mouth. His eyes, flinty and hard, are
    riveted to the bungalow up the path. http://www.dailyscript.com/scripts/shawshank.html

    June 11, 2013

  • Robert D.

    That's funny, 8 are attending so that mean 3 or 4 will actually show up lol

    June 10, 2013

  • A former member
    A former member

    I hope to meet some inspiring kindred spirits. I have written one 120 format and have another on the go.

    May 24, 2013

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