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Looking for feedback on my novel...

Wyatt B.
user 13465438
Santa Rosa, CA
Post #: 4
I have two chapters of my own novel, Secondhand Wonder, at my website. I would love feedback if anyone cares to comment - please be brutally honest, just as if you were analyzing and discussing a novel for this group! Chloe Bradley, Laura's wonderful daughter, has already made some great suggestions!
The web address is http://wyattgbessing....­ and the password is ReviseMe

Thanks!

Wyatt
Joan P.
JoanPrice
Group Organizer
Sebastopol, CA
Post #: 88
Wyatt, this is likely an age thing, but I can't read the small, light grey font. It hurts my eyes to try. I'm sorry!
Janine A.
user 14867751
Sebastopol, CA
Post #: 29
I look forward to reading it, thank you for the chance to do so!
Janine A.
user 14867751
Sebastopol, CA
Post #: 30
Wyatt, this is likely an age thing, but I can't read the small, light grey font. It hurts my eyes to try. I'm sorry!
I'm having some trouble as well, Joan...let's close our eyes and have Wyatt read it to us. Wyatt! Wyatt?
Wyatt B.
user 13465438
Santa Rosa, CA
Post #: 5
Thanks! This is helpful feedback for the blog and website as a whole. Font fixed!
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