I'm sorry I'm posting the piece for critique for the 9/21 meeting so late. I was waiting on a submission, but it turns out that person can't do it yet so I'm offering up (for the first time!) one of my more troublesome short stories, The Plot Twist.
It is saved in the files section of our group here: FOR PDF
and here: IN WORD
Now remember, I know that it doesn't quite work so be prepared to tell me why - not just that it doesn't.FWA Conference
The other thing I wanted to mention is that the FWA's Annual Conference is approaching (Oct 23-25) and you have until 9/22 to register at the cheaper price. More information can be found here: http://www.floridawriters.net/FWA_Annual_Conferences.html
I am attending on Saturday and Sunday only, so if anyone else living in the Dr. Phillips area or near there wants to carpool... let me know!
Please let me know if you have any questions about either of these.