|From:||Mona M. E.|
|Sent on:||Thursday, May 23, 2013 8:24 PM|
For those of you coming to Saturday's meeting, there are NINE submissions. I think Carmen Sterba might have changed hers today, so check it out. If you are coming to the meeting and have not RSVP'd, please do so, because it helps to have an accurate count.
Please write down as many of your comments as possible on a copy to return to the author. We'll try to keep the cross-talk to a minimum because our last meeting went on until 1:30 PM. And, yes, I'm the worst offender. Note it for yourself and we can do it at the end of the meeting for those who do not have to run off immediately.
Please do not do a verbal line by line commentary ( Ex: 'You said *was* instead of *is* on line 22 on page 3.') If you note it on your textual summary or on a copy of the submission, the author can find it and will surely be grateful for your sharp eyes.
Below, I've listed the submissions along with their page count. We review them from shortest to longest, so this will make sure the first couple of you are not late.
Umberto.doc Russ Parker 8 Pages
Chapter 4 Lawrence Lucken 10 Pages
Home-on-Earth-colesharris[masked] Cyndisa Coles-Harris 11 Pages
occvirt Chap 1-2 Vince Bryant 12 Pages
Book 0 - Prequel Robert Mapson 13 Pages
Bruckler's Amnesia - Chapter 09 Mona Everett 15 Pages
Rev. Niijima and Miss Tsuda 4-6 Carmen Sterba 20 Pages
Micah - Chapter 8 part 1 Micah Abresch 22 Pages
Multiple Choice - Chapters 1-4 Gly Jenkins 53 Pages*