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Zoto's critique, milk shakes and genre groups.

Zoto's critique, milk shakes and genre group. We will get together to critique works. We are going to look at doing genre critiques, i.e romance, poetry, children s and YA, sci-fi and fantasy, mystery and thrillers, etc. If enough people from each genre come (i.e. at least 2 people)

Standards for critiques:


The usual 10-pages max , double spaced using Times New Roman or Courier New size 12 font for ease of reading and copies for everyone, so please bring 10.


Here’s some DOs and DON’Ts for the critique group
DO….
* Ask the writer what type of crit she/he wants, be that just basic structure or grammar, or story flow, character interaction, or even just a more general ‘find all the faults you can’ crit.


*Critique the work in terms of its intended market. Don’t criticize her/his choice of genre or category.


* Praise what works as well as what doesn’t. Be specific.


* Bring copies, rather than just read out loud. It’s a lot easier to pinpoint why something is working if you see it on the page

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* Share the time fairly. Ten page maximum so everyone can offer critiques and get critiqued.


* Use the ‘sandwich’ technique – open with a positive comment, give suggestions for improvement, then finish with encouraging words. Be honest, but be kind.


DON’T….
* Don’t argue with those offering advice and don’t defend your work. Sit silently during the critique. The critique is there for you to listen to and act on only if you want to. Remember, it’s just one person’s opinion. However, there is a general rule to follow when it comes to opinions: if only one person picks up on a problem, then you can ignore it if you don’t agree with it. If two people pick up on it, you need to look at it. If three or more people pick up on a problem, then you have a problem.


* Don’t present opinions in terms of ‘that’s wrong, this is right’. Offer alternatives, raise questions.


* Don’t lose patience with those who don’t seem to be ‘getting the message’. Every writer’s journey is different, every writer learns things at different paces, and some of us have thicker heads than others.

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  • Theresa Holgate K.

    Very productive! So glad I was there.

    July 25, 2013

  • Joey F.

    great

    July 25, 2013

  • Theresa Holgate K.

    I would like to bring my future daughter-in-law. She just graduated from Chestnut Hill with her degree in English, and she is very interested in writing professionally.

    July 24, 2013

  • Shoaleh T.

    I really enjoyed meeting all of you. I'll still be on vacation till the 27th but I'm really looking forward to coming to the next meeting.

    July 24, 2013

  • Joey F.

    I'll be there; is it ok to to bring a chapter from my book for critique?

    July 24, 2013

  • RM W.

    I have a slice of shoo-fly pie for you.

    July 21, 2013

  • Eve

    I'll be thinking of you all from the road!

    1 · July 21, 2013

  • Beth

    Sorry to miss Ambler, Father91 inHospice . See you at Zoto's. Beth

    July 21, 2013

  • Theresa Holgate K.

    Looking forward to this gathering!

    July 15, 2013

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