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The Sarasota Creative Writers

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  • Sydney M.

    i want to thank everyone for their comments and notes. I am off work tomorrow and will lay out all the pages I received and make the needed adjustments. as I mentioned this is the longest section I have written with mostly interaction between the 'team'. as the environment they live in and the Phoenix are really the main characters, what the 'team' sees and how it affects them has been mixed in more in the earlier pages.
    I wrote some of this in nov and the rest last week. although I always read the previous pages before I start adding more, seems I still managed to repeat myself.
    I apologize for the length and hope I didn't rob anyone of their time and opportunity.
    i was happy to see the quality of the work presented. the choice of words brought the images to life. and i was pleased to see the critique focused on the choice of wording and structure, not the content.
    hope to see you all in 2 weeks.

    January 9, 2014

  • Joann P.

    Ok, I figured it out! Success.

    January 8, 2014

  • Joann P.

    I enjoyed the group and the material that was read. I am trying to figure out how to find the material members posted. Any suggestions? I am looking forward to our next meeting. Happy writing everyone.

    January 8, 2014

  • G P.

    Sorry I was unable to attend the meeting. My wife had to work late.

    January 8, 2014

  • A former member
    A former member

    I meant to go the meeting this evening. Unfortunately, I have a conflict. I hope I can attend the next meeting.

    January 8, 2014

  • Sydney M.

    I posted some paged in the 'file' section, see Phoenix Project. If time allows I would like to read the last section for critique.

    This is far into the story, about the 50,000 word mark. I want to be sure the idea I have here is understood by my reader.
    thanks.. see you tomorrow night.

    January 7, 2014

  • Beth S.

    Hello Everyone: I am new to the writing groups and am very interested find out if I have the skill to write. I have the imagination and ideas. I just need to get a jump start on how to get started. Beth Sprigle

    January 5, 2014

  • Alan V.

    I'm looking forward to introducing myself and meeting all of you!

    January 5, 2014

  • A former member
    A former member

    I have to pick up a friend from the airport before the meeting, so I may be late or not there at all if his flight is delayed.

    January 5, 2014

  • John B.

    Hope to meet you on Wednesday, the 8th ..tks

    January 3, 2014

  • Boots B.

    Abia, I don't know why you removed the location but this IS where the meeting is being held. Please email me directly and let me know why you did this.

    January 3, 2014

  • Philip M.

    Have a problem with the new schedule. The Port Charlotte Writers' Group has their meetings on the same days. Any chance of changing the days? Would love to attend both. Best regards, stuck in the blizzard in Boston. Hope to be home by the 8th. God willing.

    January 3, 2014

  • A former member

    A former member removed the location. It was Fruitville Library

    January 2, 2014

  • Joann P.

    I'm looking forward to getting back to my story that begins in the late 1960's.

    January 2, 2014

  • Philip M.

    Will still be in New England. Home on the 5th. Happy New Year.

    December 26, 2013

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