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For Nov 16. Here's the latest chapter of Lizzy. For those new to the group, you may want to go back and read some of the earlier chapters. I need all kinds of editing, content, line and whatever comments you may have.

Word file 40K Debbie Nov 16, 2008

In search for Lady Clare

Needs everthing please. for nov5

Word file 56K A former member Oct 30, 2008

Cleared To Engage p1 (16 Oct)

I would like any feedback you are willing to provide for the 16 October meeting. Thanks in advance. I look forward to meeting the group.

Word file 44K Tim Oct 15, 2008

the next 2500 words -Ouroboros

The next 2500 words of Ouroboros

Word file 43K A former member Sep 19, 2008


For 9/17 meeting. Yes finally back to Lizzy. This needs all kinds of critique ... line editing, content editing, passive voice etc...

Word file 39K Debbie Sep 14, 2008

Ouroboros by David Dinning first 2000 some words

Word file 42K A former member Sep 6, 2008


This is a short story of 4120 words. I am submitting it for the meeting of August 6, 2008. If my understanding is correct, it is thus far the only story posted for that date. I look forward to the meeting......... Paul

Word file 62K A former member Jul 24, 2008

Jesus Had Schiz EWG first present

These are the first 9 pages of "Jesus Had Schizophrenia," a novella where a homeless madman takes hostages in Daley PLaza.

Word file 41K Bob Jul 14, 2008


I apologize it?s a bit long, but I want to get this thing submitted to the publisher that requested it. As usual, we?re line editing and looking for passive voice. Thanks all!

Word file 54K Debbie Jun 16, 2008


Again sorry for the lateness. Thought I was going to get to something new. As usual please check for passive voice and any other glaring errors you come across. Thanks!

Word file 40K Debbie Jun 3, 2008

Marcon panel extract

I spent the Memorial Day weekend at Marcon SF convention. These are some extracts from notes for two of the 12 literary discussion panels I was on. Thought some might find them interesting or useful.

Word file 40K A former member May 28, 2008


Should be okay with the line edit but I need general comments and help with turning passive voice into active.

Word file 42K Debbie May 20, 2008


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Word file 24K Debbie May 20, 2008

Misvocation of....

Word file 85K Rich May 11, 2008

published articles

published articles.

Word file 24K A former member Apr 10, 2008

The Funky Flamingo Cake and Cookie Shop-old

old article

Word file 29K A former member Apr 10, 2008


old article

Word file 27K A former member Apr 10, 2008

Lugo-Sprague Story

old article rough draft

Word file 32K A former member Apr 10, 2008

Lugo-Sprague Story-rough 1

old articles written-draft

Word file 33K A former member Apr 10, 2008


Here's the re-write of Lizzy Chap 3. Sorry for the late hour.

Word file 40K Debbie Apr 1, 2008

Lizzy Redux Chapter 2

Here's the smut I promised. If harliquin want smut, smut they will get. If you don't want to read explicit material skip this. Sorry its late, life got in the way.

Word file 38K Debbie Mar 18, 2008

Lizzy Chap1 Rewrite

Here's the re-write or chapter one. Hopefully I've eliminated the confusion.

Word file 39K Debbie Mar 2, 2008


Woo Hoo, Debbie is writing again. Here's the Chap 1 re-write of Lizzy. I'm re-doing it in the first person as a novella. As usual, please keep an eye out for passive tense. Thanks

Word file 36K Debbie Feb 18, 2008

Luba Sweet Luba Scene 8

Here is the remainder of the final scene of "Luba".

Word file 63K A former member Feb 14, 2008

Luba Sweet Luba Scenes 7 and 8A

Word file 42K A former member Feb 1, 2008

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