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Re: [newtech-1] Content help needed for - mobile friendly email design service

From: Jonathan J.
Sent on: Friday, January 11, 2013 1:26 PM

Definitely clean up the About Us page to be more specific on the team members and your backgrounds. For example where on your About Us page you write: "We are a team of professional from diverse industries who have clocked over 100 thousand hours of watching the digital Information era grow.", honestly that could be written about any group of individual over 20 years old. The rest of the page is similarly generic. 

Take look at this site: They use statistics and case studies and helpful resources to illustrate their value.

Jonathan Jaffe | Founding Owner 
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On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 10:23 AM, Varun - IT/Startup Consultant <[address removed]> wrote:

We just launched this website/service -

I need help from techno-sales consultant here to fine tune the content and make it more market-able. 

any comments/feedback would be appreciated. 

Varun B

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