February 2, 2013 - 23 went

Photo Scavenger Hunt w/Image Review

Length Strength: The top is in focus. The beam goes to unknown destination Distraction: Not sure if framed well

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Added by Jonathan Witcoski
on Feb 3, 2013.
 

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  • Kevin

    Strength - All the lines lead the perspective into that bottom left third; I sense the distance. Distraction - I'd have liked to see a deeper depth of field, just enough so that the beginning of the railing in the front would be in focus as well.

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  • Pat Everett

    Again you play angles and depth of field together well. I'd like a prize at the bottom of the photo, not just the brown sign.

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  • A former member

    Strength- very cool viewpoint on the theme. What's distracting is that the focal point is higher than the intersection of the rule of thirds- so you have to force your eye to look at the rest of the composition, but could be fairly rescued by cropping square the left portion of the photo, as then the bit pointing into the void becomes a nice focal point, and I don't mind that it's a bit out of focus b/c of the layers of abstraction.

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