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AWG Meeting - Critique

  • Mar 12, 2014 · 7:00 PM
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1) "The Man Who Whistled" by Maurice. Opening of a novel.

2) "Pittsburgh 1-2" by John S. First two chapters of a YA novel.

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  • Terence K.

    I have extensive hand-written comments on Maurice's story - I'll bring them next time, unless there's an alternative process.

    March 14, 2014

  • Ruth K.

    Good comments. I really enjoyed the meeting.
    I have some comments on Maurice's work. Should I send them directly to you, Maurice--or do you intend to present your chapter at an upcoming meeting?

    March 13, 2014

  • travellarry

    Enjoyed being back to AWG..(after my hiatus to India). Love the group.

    March 13, 2014

  • Thierry S.

    Excellent as always. The good, the bad, and the ugly, and every shade of gray in between.

    March 13, 2014

  • Sue P.

    Very thoughtful comments were made that I hope were useful to the writer.

    March 13, 2014

  • William T.

    Great. Use & informative as usual.

    March 12, 2014

  • Di

    So I have to back out. Ugh! I was on the wait list, didn't think I'd get a spot, and so I agreed to stay late at work!

    March 12, 2014

  • Kate C.

    My meds are messing with me today so I'm not sure I'll be able to attend tonight.

    March 12, 2014

  • Jim

    Starting to feel a cold coming on, and I don't want to share...

    March 12, 2014

  • Ruth K.

    Thanks for sending the files. I'll give some comments, which I hope may be useful to the authors, at the meeting.

    March 10, 2014

  • Thierry S.

    Nope, can't open Maurice's file. I logged out and back in a couple of times. refreshed the browser, and it's still telling me I am not allowed to view the file. Can someone send it to me please. [masked]. Thanks!

    March 10, 2014

    • E. T. P.

      I've just sent it to you as a pdf file

      March 10, 2014

    • Sue P.

      I attempted to send.

      March 10, 2014

  • Ruth K.

    Although I was able to open John's file, my computer still refuses to open Maurice's. I seem to be having the same problem as Thierry. Could someone please send it to me? [masked]

    March 10, 2014

  • Cathryn P.

    I have read both drafts and would like to wait until Wednesday to comment.

    March 10, 2014

  • Ruth K.

    I can't open either John's or Maurice's file

    Could Maurice and John send me their work as attachments to an email? My email address is [masked]
    I really want to read them both.

    Ruth

    March 10, 2014

    • Sue P.

      I could open Maurice's but not John's. If you get John's, could you forward to me at [masked]? Sue

      March 10, 2014

    • Sue P.

      I have them both now. Thank you.

      March 10, 2014

  • Liliana D.

    I cannot open Maurice's work.That file appears to be gone.I have John's.

    March 9, 2014

  • Gary H.

    I can open John's now. Love the first line! (Will save the rest of my critiques for the meeting, by which time I plan to have read beyond the first line.)

    1 · March 9, 2014

  • Gary H.

    I can't open John's file.

    March 9, 2014

    • John S.

      It's working here. But I have deleted an reloaded it now, just to be sure.

      March 9, 2014

    • John S.

      I can't open Maurice's and I can't find in in "files" section of the website.

      March 9, 2014

  • Roxanne R.

    Sorry to have to cancel so late and to miss the discussion, but I will not be abler to make it to the meetup this evening. Hope to be there next time.

    March 5, 2014

  • Cathryn P.

    This is going to be an adventure - and I am ready!

    March 2, 2014

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