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Olin Myers script review May 24, 2012

Greetings BSG Members!

Olin Myers script We All Care is available NOW for review. To access the script click onto "More," then click onto "Files," and Olin’s script WeAllCare5 file is available for review.


All members are invited to either bring a snack or soft drink; or $2.00

Time for review: Arrive at 5:45 we begin at 6: PM.

We have a new location and time:

Boston Prudential

800 Boylston Street

16th Floor

Script Review: 6-9PM

Looking forward to seeing you at our May Script review meet up!!

Warmest Regards,

Deborah Shariff


Boston Screenwriters Group

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  • A former member
    A former member

    The more I engaged the script, the more I liked it--the script. I can appreciate the execution of a piece of art, even if I find its subject matter problematic or even offensive. For example, I might consider a car-wreck scene disturbing, but appreciate the art of it. So, I don't care for the characters--but that's who they are!

    To reiterate: The story needs more conflict/tension early on, to get the audience curious, until they want to follow the characters.

    A more provocative title?

    May 25, 2012

  • Deborah S.

    I am totally blown away with the depth of comments each writer gave to the "hot seat contender!" Since we had more time to discuss Olin's script, attendees were still talking right up until 9PM. The discussion was very engaging and productive!!! And a special shout out to those who didn't get lost with finding our new location. Cheers & Blessings to all who attended last night's meet-up!!!

    May 25, 2012

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