AWG Meeting - Critique

  • December 4, 2013 · 7:00 PM
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1) "The Sequence - Chapter 2 - Emma" by Diane.  Chapter 1 is available on the site, we read it a few weeks ago.

2) "The Shadow of the Rock Star" Chapter 1 - a novel from Gary.

3) "LastFare" Short Short Fiction from Tim I for the WD Contest.

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  • Gary H.

    Thanks to everyone for your feedback! I will have a revised copy of the first chapter available for anyone interested (I'm putting back in the part introducing Penelope that I had deleted, among other things), and might also upload the second chapter for critique. Thanks again.

    December 5, 2013

  • Di

    Wow thank you ALL for your feedback, each and every one! It was so fantastic. I have so many ideas for this chapter now There is nothing like having 18 sets of extra eyes.

    December 4, 2013

  • Roger B.

    I wasn't able to download Gary's piece.

    December 2, 2013

    • Joanna

      Same here, but I was able to access it in the files.

      December 2, 2013

  • Michael K.

    Sorry, I'll be at a conference. Yes, about rice.

    David and Joanna shall lead you.

    November 24, 2013

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